Friday, February 15, 2013

Keshav Sharma-Blog Post #2


In the short story “Hills Like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemingway, Hemingway depicts a story of a man and a girl who are both simply referred to as the “American” and the “girl.” In the story, the American and the girl are depicted as waiting for a train somewhere in Spain and eventually decide to drink some beers in the train station’s bar to pass time. As implied through the conversation the two characters have in the bar, the girl is depicted as being younger and more immature compared to the “American,” who takes up a dominant position in the conversation.
Hemingway mainly depicts two kinds of conflicts in this text: character vs. self and character vs. character. On one side, the “girl” suffers an internal struggle on how to handle the implied abortion the “American” suggests she have done. On the other side, the girl suffers an external conflict when she argues with the “American” on how to handle the supposed abortion. Possibly due to her age and her inexperience with such serious matters, the girl attempts to reason with the American regarding their future if this abortion were to actually be done. The kind of response the girl gives the American when he brings the topic up suggests a sense of uncertainty and perhaps even apathy.
It is important to note that although the American attempts to convince the girl, referred to as “Jig” in the text, to have an abortion, the girl is in a sense already undergoing an abortion by consuming alcohol. Many guidelines in the real world strongly advise pregnant women to avoid the consumption of alcohol in order to prevent serious defects from occurring during development. If the “girl” really cared about her child, she would not be consuming alcohol and she would also not demonstrate such a degree of apathy towards the seriousness of an abortion. With the common worldview on abortion being almost unanimously negative in today’s real world, it is amazing to see how nonchalantly Hemingway depicted the seriousness of it in his short story. Perhaps at the time this story was written, abortion was not such a serious issue, however, the views in the story could also reflect the opinions of Hemingway.
In the end, the girl makes no definitive decision on the matter of having an abortion or not. It can be assumed from the conversation in the bar, however, that the girl’s immaturity and inexperience has likely led her to follow along with what the American suggested she do. The fact that she wishes to quickly dismiss the topic of conversation suggests that her internal emotions prevent her from making a decision or that she simply does not care enough to make a decision, judging from how her attention frequently went to the environmental surroundings rather than to the American.

1 comment:

  1. Keshav,

    You write, “In the short story “Hills Like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemingway, Hemingway depicts a story of a man and a girl who are both simply referred to as the “American” and the “girl.” Interesting that you identify the male as a “man” and the woman as a “girl” (I know the story does this to some extent – are you simply echoing the text, or is this meant to imply a difference in ages and/or maturity levels? Also, the “girl” is named so use the name.

    Ahh – and so you’ve answered my question. Good! “As implied through the conversation the two characters have in the bar, the girl is depicted as being younger and more immature compared to the “American,” who takes up a dominant position in the conversation.” This last part is important – can you elaborate on this dominant position?

    You do a good job identifying conflicts. However, when you write, “the girl suffers an external conflict” the wording is a bit off. The external conflict is a literary device used in storytelling; she might be suffering emotionally, but she isn’t “suffering” the conflict per se.


    Not sure I’m following you here: “Possibly due to her age and her inexperience with such serious matters, the girl attempts to reason with the American regarding their future if this abortion were to actually be done.” Wouldn’t most women, young and innocent or not, wish to discuss the possibility they might have an abortion? I don’t understand why you think she does so only because she’s young and immature.

    “The kind of response the girl gives the American when he brings the topic up suggests a sense of uncertainty and perhaps even apathy.” What’s the significance here?

    “the girl is in a sense already undergoing an abortion by consuming alcohol . . .” This is factually incorrect, for one thing, and, since the girl/Jig’s point of view isn’t used in the story, you can’t make assumptions about how she feels or doesn’t feel about the fetus/child. It’s also a large oversimplification to suggest she doesn’t “care” at all because she has a drink or two – we have no idea what her typical behavior is like, and many current guidelines condone the occasional drink. I don’t say any of this to impose any personal judgment but to caution you to avoid making assertions that you can’t back up with text. You CAN discuss how your views on drinking and pregnancy, etc. affect your understanding and opinion of Jig – that’s within the bounds of such criticism.


    You write, “Perhaps at the time this story was written, abortion was not such a serious issue, however, the views in the story could also reflect the opinions of Hemingway.” At the time it was written, social rules about drinking were much more lax than they are today. If you were going to discuss social views/laws about abortion and or drinking during pregnancy, you’d need to do some definitive research.

    “In the end, the girl makes no definitive decision on the matter of having an abortion or not. It can be assumed from the conversation in the bar, however, that the girl’s immaturity and inexperience has likely led her to follow along with what the American suggested she do.” I think you’re correct on both counts here—no definitive decision, and that she probably bends to the wishes of the American . You would want to discuss this in terms of textual clues and signals that prompt the ideal reader into a particular interpretation.

    “The fact that she wishes to quickly dismiss the topic of conversation suggests that her internal emotions prevent her from making a decision or that she simply does not care enough to make a decision, judging from how her attention frequently went to the environmental surroundings rather than to the American.” This section is strong, contains a lot of possibilities for analysis. I think you have some strong analysis here and have a good sense of how to write within the bounds of Reader Response criticism but need to be careful about how much you assume about character motivation when we aren’t granted access to it.

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