Neddy Merrill is introduced at the edge of his friends Helen and Donald Westerhazy's pool with his wife Lucinda. The setting is a warm summer Sunday in which the four are lounging around and drinking at the Westerhazy's extravagant pool recalling their excessive drinking the night before. Alcohol plays a large role in the perceptual clarity Neddy Merrill has thought his journey and it is only when the liquor is no longer available that Neddy begins to see through the narcissistic veil he has developed. This is exemplified best when Neddy reaches the Welcher's property were the pool is found to be dried up symbolizing an upcoming alcoholic drought. As he continues without his beverages the world around him becomes very hostile, passing cars ridicule him as he crosses a busy road, the public pool has burdening regulation and is chaotic to navigate and the Halloran's enlighten Neddy of his own financial ruin. Within 3 pools Mr. Merrill's perception has become lucid to the reality of the world around him. It's apparent Neddy's ability to process such jarring information is still lacking though as he begins to question further once Hellen Sachs reveals her husband Eric's fight against an illness that leaves him visibly scarred, "Was he losing his memory, had his gift for concealing painful facts let him forget that he had sold his house, that his children were in trouble, and that his friend had been ill? His eyes slipped from Eric's face to his abdomen, where be saw three pale, sutured scars, two of them at least a foot long" just before Merrill begins next sobering swim through their pool. (Snubs at the Biswanger's). (Sobering swim at Shirley Adams). (Distraught breakdown from sober confusion and his final icy swim at the Gilmartins'). (Realization of his demise)
The pools that make up what Mr. Merrill has dubbed "the stream Lucinda" create a very strict order for Neddy as he progresses in his journey home, this symbolizes time and its singular direction forward; Further the notion is expanded upon with each pool symbolizing a crucial point in time of Neddy's life. Initially the pools seem fairly benign as Merrill opts to swim them for fun, but as he grows old and tired and the cold winter of his twilight years approaches Neddy finds himself inexplicably drawn to each pool. This inability to skip the pools binds him to the events of his life. This sectioning of Neddy's life creates a profound order that is very enigmatic in the beginning of the story but eventually is revealed as the reader picks up on references to years gone by "(Sachs 3 years ago)" as well as other cues. The imagery and the events that occur at each pool portray Neddy's state of affairs at each interval in a suggestive manner. Ironically the farther Merrill progresses along his tragic journey down the stream Lucinda to return home to his family, the further he finds himself drifting from them. The pools and their symbolic meanings develop in such a manner that their assistance is crucial to develop the central paradox.
The pools that make up what Mr. Merrill has dubbed "the stream Lucinda" create a very strict order for Neddy as he progresses in his journey home, this symbolizes time and its singular direction forward; Further the notion is expanded upon with each pool symbolizing a crucial point in time of Neddy's life. Initially the pools seem fairly benign as Merrill opts to swim them for fun, but as he grows old and tired and the cold winter of his twilight years approaches Neddy finds himself inexplicably drawn to each pool. This inability to skip the pools binds him to the events of his life. This sectioning of Neddy's life creates a profound order that is very enigmatic in the beginning of the story but eventually is revealed as the reader picks up on references to years gone by "(Sachs 3 years ago)" as well as other cues. The imagery and the events that occur at each pool portray Neddy's state of affairs at each interval in a suggestive manner. Ironically the farther Merrill progresses along his tragic journey down the stream Lucinda to return home to his family, the further he finds himself drifting from them. The pools and their symbolic meanings develop in such a manner that their assistance is crucial to develop the central paradox.
The summary is very good. You may want to address (briefly) character motivation; the average reader would be confused as to why someone would choose to do do what Neddy does. You’ll also want to briefly explain the “The stream Lucinda” reference.
ReplyDelete“It is this increasing disorientation as his perception is sharpest and he stands on such familiar ground that forms the paradoxical backbone of the story.” Thesis is coming along very well. Generally well written, too, but I did have to read it a few times. Might refine syntax a bit. Otherwise – great.
Do you think the pools in general are symbolic? You mention the Welcher’s “dried up” pool as a symbol for Neddy’s withdrawal/need. You will want to explain how/why this dried up pool and accompanying imagery is symbolic of such. You do a great job paraphrasing this explanation, but be sure to use quotes as well.
“Within 3 pools Mr. Merrill's perception has become lucid to the reality of the world around him.” NOT trying to nitpick grammar, but this seems to be an important point, so . . a person himself becomes lucid (rather than the perception doing so) and one cannot become lucid “to” something. Just reword.
Thus far you’ve dealt primarily with symbolism and setting (you might point out directly that setting and symbolism are very interwined in this story. Your paradox is pretty clear. You should probably deal with irony as well.
“This sectioning of Neddy's life creates a profound order that is very enigmatic in the beginning of the story but eventually is revealed as the reader picks up on references to years gone by "(Sachs 3 years ago)" as well as other cues.” This section skews Reader Response ,but thus far the analysis has been New Critical (or seemingly so, even though you can deal with symbolism, setting, and paradox using R.R. as well). All that said, I think you’re doing N.C. so perhaps you might just avoid language like “cues” for “the reader”.
“. Ironically the farther Merrill progresses along his tragic journey down the stream Lucinda to return home to his family, the further he finds himself drifting from them. The pools and their symbolic meanings develop in such a manner that their assistance is crucial to develop the central paradox.” Ahh. And here we have the irony. Very good. A good deal of situational irony here, too: “Once he reaches the house Merrill realizes that he entirely alone and finds himself more lost than ever before.”
The conclusion does very much repeat the intro in a number of ways. Do consider discussing the universality/timelessness of the story/its themes, etc. For instance, the story can be read as an allegory in which all the major elements represent a journey through, well, life, in which the proverbial wool is somewhere/somehow pulled from the traveller’s eyes. Many critics read it as a critique of American middle class life, so there’s that possibility, too.
Pretty impressive thus far; it appears you have a good portion of the paper already done, so I hope my commentary simply helps you refine it.
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Thank you for the guidance, I agree with most of your points for revision. I put this together in one sitting so it is very disorganized at the moment, but it will be cleaned up quite a bit before it is submitted as a paper.
ReplyDeleteHey Chris, I did Reader Response of "The Swimmer". It was very interesting reading your analysis and the difference from New Criticism to Reader Response. I noticed things in your analysis I never thought of. I might have to rethink some of my analysis. I interpreted the pool as wealth and the drinks as happiness, hence the relationship between wealth and happiness. I read Ms. Bolaski's response and I have to admit I had a little trouble myself following along. That being said I know it is a rough draft and I would really like to read it when it's finished.
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